CROW (No More Mr Nice Guy)

I have started another crow painting.  I originally did part of the background with collage elements, but wasn't too happy with that, so I removed the collage parts from the canvas.  His feet aren't done, I find them the most difficult to render.  I think the upper half needs to be toned down and made greyer and the hint of a window frame made darker.  I really am not sure how this one works composition wise, since it  appears divided in half , which I know is a no-no..............hmmmmmmmmmm

I wasn't sure if I could post the two together, but it was successful.  The one on the right is the painting with the revisions done.  Thought it would help me see what else needs to be worked on.